"The Visitors" Movie

 Logline: 

Earth’s elite are holding the planet to ransom. In a surprising turn of events, two aliens were stunned to learn that one of their own was involved. The activation of a hidden team sets the stage for a thrilling adventure, where the alien/human hybrid crew fights against religious extremists to protect the planet. Let the game of chess commence.

Synopsis

In 2052, extraterrestrial envoys Bjorn and Zorn from the technologically advanced Planet Aeon embark on a desperate quest to save Earth from annihilation brought on by relentless Religious Wars. Forming an unlikely alliance with courageous humans, they traverse timelines—from present day realities to the turmoil of mid-21st century Earth—while venturing across icy Enceladus, the vibrant cities of Caprice, their own luminous home world Aeon, as well as the bustling metropolises of New York and Paris, the rugged outback of Australia, and the volatile landscapes of the Middle East. Religion, deeply entwined in global society, fuels conflict as powerful leaders stubbornly resist transformation and peace. Amidst perilous encounters, sharp-witted banter, and poignant drama, the duo uncovers Dorian—a cunning Aeonite traitor secretly conspiring with the enigmatic US President. As tensions rise and loyalties are tested, Bjorn and Zorn face formidable threats and moral dilemmas, culminating in a dramatic showdown that will determine humanity's fate: can these interstellar allies spark redemption, or will Earth’s legacy end in ruin?

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Melbourne Live Indie Film Fest has added a note to your submission:

The screenplay successfully blends nerve-wracking   situations and dramatic moments with humour and comedy, creating a   well-balanced and engaging experience. The characters' coping mechanism of   finding humour in stressful situations endears them to the audience and adds a   human touch to their extra-terrestrial journey.

"Alien Traitor" explores the theme of   Religion as a protagonist, which adds complexity to the conflict and serves   as an impediment to the characters' mission. The exploration of religious and   political figures hindering progress adds depth to the narrative, making it   thought-provoking and relevant.

The screenplay's plot twist at the end involving   a time paradox is particularly noteworthy, leaving a lasting impact on the   reader and heightening the intrigue surrounding the characters' decisions and   their impact on destiny.

"Alien Traitor" is an enthralling and   well-crafted screenplay that excels in its genre. The imaginative   world-building, captivating plot, and nuanced character development create a compelling   cinematic experience. As the characters embark on their mission to save   humanity and confront the consequences of their decisions, the screenplay   keeps the readers at the edge of their seats, eagerly anticipating how the   story will unfold.

SYDNEY GLOBAL CINE CARNIVAL Award Winner September 2023